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[Alot to learn]

This takes me back...

This actually sounds a lot like when I first started. To be honest, it's sounds pretty terrible man. I'm not trying to hate, I'm just giving it to you straight (lol, that rhymed). But I don't want to tell you you're bad and then run away, I'm not that mean.

The first thing would be the flow to the base and hats. You need to hit those key rhymes in those places. Once you start doing that, it'll come running out of your mouth much smoother than it is now. It actually is easier to memorize rhymes when they're on beat too, something Shakespeer figured out actually haha.

The next would be your sound. Working on the above mentioned may fix this, but I have to mention it. At times you sound like you want to go all out, but it comes out almost like a whisper. Don't be afraid to just go all out and put some voice into it. Don't hold back! I know those computer mics don't allow you to do that all the time, but there's way's around it.

Anyways, keep at it, you got Alot to Learn.

Broken-Needle responds:

thanks for the constructive review man, this helps, but u said there's a way around the computer mic problem, can u tell me how 2 do that, cuz whenever i actually try n deliver that shit nice it comes out as if its monotone.... anyway i appreciate this review man n the help,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[.:Z:.Together]

Fort Minor vibe.

This reminds me of the song Remember the Name from Fort Minor. Mainly because of the way it flows. I swear you could take the vocals from that song and paste them into this lol. A very inspiring piece.

10/10 and 5/5

[.:Z:.Feelings]

Speachless...

The most original beat...err, melody I've heard in a long time. Never heard something so perfect for just straight poetry. May use this some time. I'll keep it stored for later ;) .

[Chaos(Produced by Rock Howard)]

Is there any left?

After hearing that I'm just wondering, are there any rhymes left? lol. Nice man. I said this in another song, but again, I'd like to hear a change up between the chorus and verses.

I like the way the chorus is represented, but it's lacking a distinct contrast from the verses. Some think its cheating to add effects and mess around with voices, but you should definitely do that for the chorus here. It'll make your verses stand out even more.

Keep doing your thing man.

[Now or Never]

Saying "I'm serial" and making it sound badass!

At first glance your song may seem like it strattles the line between being gansta and being lyrical. Since I'm an avid hiphop listener I know downright this is a lyrical barrage of madness. So I wouldn't worry about the hater because you were on point the whole way man.

The only beef I have with the song is it's too in your face the whole time. You could have used the chorus to slow things down a bit to change up the pace. That's just my personal preference though. Good job man.

[That Ain't You (feat. Nimbus)]

Noice!

Great song, like the composition. About Soleberg sounding like Eminem, I thought it was only the flow, not the sound itself. And it sounded like the old Eminem anyways so that's a good thing lol. Anyways, keep making real music guys. Peace.

[Flash Helix no.3]

Attitude!

I love this track man. I would make a song too it if wasn't so short! I can always extend it myself, but it's cool to have things mix up througout the song rather than copy and pasting.

This is beggin for an extended remix!

TimeBender responds:

This is a epic review, and a lesser epic responce. I would have made this longer but I didn't have many ideas going through at the time.