Burly's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Be Real (Fly With The Angels)]

Good shit man.

I like what you guys got here a lot. Hope you don't mind some constructive critique.

The flow:

Your flows are pretty tight and smooth most of the time. The only problem I had was at times the flow just got waay too slow (most the first guy, don't know his name). I don't mind slow flows, but there is such thing as too slow when you find yourself stretching words out too long. Nothing one or two more words in each line couldn't solve. But again, it was on point, just could have used some spicing up.

The rhymes were pretty good, sometimes got a little bland, but overall tight as hell.

That's all I really got for now. Again, good shit, this is hiphop. 5/5

Peace!

jerseyendless responds:

ah thanks alot man
and yea the first guy stevie B is workin on that.
but thanks for the review man.
review our other newest track rockstar
and let esman know what you think of him.

stay up cuzzin.

Jae nyce a.k.a Ej

[KA-RIB - Let's Try This Again]

Nice flow.

Pretty good man. Let's populate Newgrounds with real hiphop. Keep it come'n. Peace.

[Colored Nights]

Amazing potential.

This is a great piece. Great for high energy and dance hiphop. You've definitely got an interesting sound going, you just need to work on your production value more.

Keep it up man! You're shit's getting better.

C-Enterprise responds:

lol thanks,
in fact I didn't work too much on this as some of the previous productions, I'll take more care of my things ehe

[10th November]

Amazing stuff man.

It's funny seeing all the people that have never heard real hiphop cringe at saying this is amazing lol.

Anyways...I'm writing something for this def!

My only complaint is, the violin sounds electronic and kinda weak. But overall it's an amazing production. Great job man!

C-Enterprise responds:

Thanks man ;)
I got a couple of violins and cellos, one of them is in my latest production but it's so hard to find good instruments and don't use them for every production ehehe
Thanks again ;)

[This World (Retribution Beat)]

Fiya

This actually isn't my computer right now. My HDD failed, so I've got to fix that. >_<

Anyways, the song came out above my expectations, I think we came a long way with this. I've always felt like something was missing from it though.

About your flow, it's good to try new things, that's how you learn man.

Oh, and I don't have any of the files for any of our songs now... I hope you got some lyrics of mine saved. :/

HeLLsGaUrDiAn responds:

O...M...G, that's pretty bad. Well thank god you usually send me your lyrics so I'm kind of like a back up. By the way, I'm offering a bargain for your lyrics...let's see....hmm...$19.99 for a verse and if you buy all the lyrics I have then I will only charge $99.99. This is a bargain that you can't pass up! lol Seriously though, I got you, just hit me up on AIM when you get the chance.

[Epic Hip =HFX=]

0_o

Awesomeness. I may just make a song to this some day.

This should definitely go into the modern hiphop category though.

Great stuff man!

Phyrnna responds:

Do let me know if you do! I want to hear it! ^_^

[Jersey Girl (ft Ryan Wariki)]

The singing....

I'm sorry you took such a big offense to my last critique. Didn't know all the cool kids were listening to Jerseyendless these days, I'm sorry for not "keeping up". Anyways, if you're a real artist, you shouldn't be pissed at honest critiques dude.

Now that, that's out of the way...

Pros:

- I like the oldschool vibe, it's relaxing and fits really well.
- Nice thoughtful song that any special lady will go giddy over.
- The singing that echoes words during the verse is a nice touch.

Cons:

- Rhymes are a little too simplified and cliche.
- Flow is almost there, but not quite.
- The chorus singing is way off key. Sounds like I used to sound...

Overall:

Nice song overall, but too simplistic and overdone.

jerseyendless responds:

i didnt say that everyone was listening to jersey endless. i said that you and ppl like chucktown and cronof and ppl like that criticize on our older stuff and not knowing that we've somewhat improved over the months, or some think that we've shown no improvement. anyways, thanks for the critique, but some of the stuff you said in the cons is the stuff we were already told. we'll be working on having more complex word play and flow and all the other stuff you've said, but your the first to say that the singing is off key. we'll work on that too.

[Loss of a Loved One (R.I.P.)]

I hate to be the asshole here...

It's awesome to see you using rap to let feelings out in a real way. The song itself is admirable on all levels. That being said, the biggest problem of the song was the flow. Everything felt evenly spaced and said at the same emphasis. And for a song so personal, I don't feel the emotion in it really. I'm sure you had a lot when writing it though. You just need to work on your delivery big time, and the lyrics a little bit.

Just trying to be honest.

jerseyendless responds:

its all good

[This World]

Oldschool Style

I like the main oldschool sound to the bass and snare. The different piano sounds add a nice atmosphere to the mix. Many inexperienced emcees will find this hard to rap over because of the slow speed though. I'll probably come up with something over time, lyrics just come to me as I listen to this masterpiece. Keep it up dood.

S-Rock responds:

Thanks man I really appreciate it :D I forgot about this song to be honest :)

[Mandolynn]

!!!

I can't believe it man. At 16 you've got a ****ing bright future ahead of you. I like your take on things. Mainstream = garbage. You = above the competition.