Burly's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[This World]

Oldschool Style

I like the main oldschool sound to the bass and snare. The different piano sounds add a nice atmosphere to the mix. Many inexperienced emcees will find this hard to rap over because of the slow speed though. I'll probably come up with something over time, lyrics just come to me as I listen to this masterpiece. Keep it up dood.

S-Rock responds:

Thanks man I really appreciate it :D I forgot about this song to be honest :)

[Alot to learn]

This takes me back...

This actually sounds a lot like when I first started. To be honest, it's sounds pretty terrible man. I'm not trying to hate, I'm just giving it to you straight (lol, that rhymed). But I don't want to tell you you're bad and then run away, I'm not that mean.

The first thing would be the flow to the base and hats. You need to hit those key rhymes in those places. Once you start doing that, it'll come running out of your mouth much smoother than it is now. It actually is easier to memorize rhymes when they're on beat too, something Shakespeer figured out actually haha.

The next would be your sound. Working on the above mentioned may fix this, but I have to mention it. At times you sound like you want to go all out, but it comes out almost like a whisper. Don't be afraid to just go all out and put some voice into it. Don't hold back! I know those computer mics don't allow you to do that all the time, but there's way's around it.

Anyways, keep at it, you got Alot to Learn.

Broken-Needle responds:

thanks for the constructive review man, this helps, but u said there's a way around the computer mic problem, can u tell me how 2 do that, cuz whenever i actually try n deliver that shit nice it comes out as if its monotone.... anyway i appreciate this review man n the help,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Flash Helix no.3]

Attitude!

I love this track man. I would make a song too it if wasn't so short! I can always extend it myself, but it's cool to have things mix up througout the song rather than copy and pasting.

This is beggin for an extended remix!

TimeBender responds:

This is a epic review, and a lesser epic responce. I would have made this longer but I didn't have many ideas going through at the time.