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Smooth

Me and my boy are making a hiphop track from this one. Great sound. Thanks for the upload.

GREAT. Almost.

Really like the relaxed vibe you've been doing lately. This song is great, but you were right about the sax, it is cheesy, it ruins the song for me. Hopefully you can figure that out lol. Great job though.

EternalXIII responds:

Yeah, so what I think I'm going to do is really filter or compress the shit out of that sax so it's barely audible and find a chunkier instrument to play over that it. I'm also probably gonna extend it by a minute.

Since I made it and put it up, I obviously don't mind some cheese every once and a while!!! (& The next version should be pretty trippy. And If I like it, it will probably be the final.

Thanks for the review!

Happy fun!

Interesting song. The only thing that bothers me is the snare (that's just my taste). The melody reminds me of a video game remix of sorts. This is techno, so I guess that's expected lol. Good job buddy.

Box-Killa responds:

:D Actually i agree with you, the snair could be a little bit better, but then If i changed it, the song will probably sound weird:(

Nice

Really, really nice.

Keep it up man.

Joey Keys.

This song reminds me of starting at the bottom, climbing up a ladder (figuratively). I really like it. Can't say much bad about it. Something is missing to really strike a chord with me though. Can't tell what.

Reminds me of Final Fantasy III

I don't know if you meant it, but it sounds like something straight out of an oldschool Final Fantasy game. Not a bad thing, but not something I'd generally write stuff too.

It needs a little more change up I think, but the quality is nice as spice.

Some stuff

Overall, I like where it's going. It needs more though.

The main piano repeats waaay too much. I know it's 4 measures long, but it doesn't sound like it, maybe have it change up a little more each measure. I feel like there just needs to be more layers of instruments, or ambient sounds of some type. Just subtle little things to make it not seem so boring (chime melody maybe).

It's a nice start though. I'm harsh, but it's only cuz it's good for you. :)

T-Free responds:

Thanks, this helps me alot. I'll change some things for more variation and some ambient parts might be awesome, too. I hope the newer version won't be as 'boring' as this. xD

Thank you very much for reviewing on this, Burly!^^

Wow, lol.

You have no idea how much you piss me off Wyze. I work my ass off on a bunch of songs and maybe like one of them will possibly make it on the front page. You mess around with some orchestra and get on the front page instantly lol.

Good job, I guess lol. It did make me laugh. Peace!

Blasphem-E responds:

LMAO man, you've made top 30 with your 1 song twice. You have no right to be bitching. :D. But, if this annoys you, I should point out that I didn't even do the orchestral stuff, I merely did the "singing". :)

Thanks for popping by man.

goood shit.

I really like this one.

First, very original way to present this popular subject in hiphop. Coupled with the first person story it makes it feel completely new.

Singing is a nice touch.

Mixing could have been a tiny bit more interesting, but overall the simplicity works in its favor.

BigRed responds:

Mixing is definitly my weak point right now, I'm hoping to get better. Thanks for the review!

Inspiration.

From the moment I heard this beat I could feel something special brewing. I just wrote lyrics for this, l'll let you know when the song's done.

Awesome beat.

K-Dm responds:

awesome

link me up for sure when its done

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